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I have been creating a lot of websites for fun, and basiclly what I want to know is if they are any good. I just create simple websites too. :(
http://www.freewebs.com/lupineranch/

hey,
can i make a few suggestions to make your web site better?
1. your background images are too 'strong' ... i suggest you reduce their transparency ...
2. you should add a menu on the right
3. you should separate your text with paragraph headers rather than have lots of text ... people on the net usually scan rather than read and having paragraph headers will make the scanning easier
4. check your spelling ... 'Charictors' should be 'Characters'
5. have in bold big letters what you want people to do when they read your page
6. i suggest a bigger font ... i am finding dark purple on light purple a bit hard to read
good effort overall ... just needs a bit of tweaking
hope this helps
serge

that's a good site u got there. but if u need to attract visitors, and lure them to come back, all u need is more contents.

How did u make the online form. I have never been able to do that. I am slowly building on me HTML knowledge. What HTML editor do u use? What do u think of my site, www.chrismr.com -- I know, its a mess. I host my own web page

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Counting lines of code
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Javascript/DOM & Loop...
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